Showing posts with label 2 Stars. Show all posts
Showing posts with label 2 Stars. Show all posts

April 9, 2012

Come Home Bone by Elizabeth Bonello and Illustrated by Swapan Debnath

This is a children’s book about a little girl who comes home to find that her dog has made a mess in her room looking for his bone. She hurries to clean up the mess before her mother arrives while also trying to figure out what the dog is looking for. The book is written in rhyme. By content it appears to be written for young children, but by word count and language it seems more appropriate for older kids. I let both my 4 year old and 7 year old read it and neither were too excited about it. The 4 year old liked that there was a girl and a dog in the story, but lines like “An archeologist would be proud of your dig,” and “I can see that you’ve given it that old college try,” threw her off. The 7 year old thought the story was too baby for him. And I especially didn’t like the line “My mother is now approaching my room, she’ll arrive as quickly as a witch on a broom.” I understand it was probably used for the sake or rhyming, but comparing her mother to a witch made absolutely no sense to the rest of the story.

I also received a DVD with this book about teaching manners to children. Although the DVD had lots of great information and was clearly presented, the format was terribly boring for watching at home. It would be great for use as a review or game style activity in the classroom.

2 stars

I received a copy of this book for the purpose of review.
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March 30, 2012

The Road by Cormac McCarthy


I bought this book sometime over the summer, probably because I had it confused somehow with On The Road by Jack Kerouac. Oops. I do things like that a lot. Oh well.

Anyway, the book’s premise is pretty simple: a father and son (always referred to as “the man” and “the boy,” never named) are wandering through a post-apocalyptic, burned out America. That’s about the best I can do without stealing from the blurb on the back: “Their destination is the coast, although they don’t know what, if anything, awaits them there…It boldly imagines a future in which no hope remains, but in which the father and his son, ‘each the other’s world entire,’ are sustained by love.”

I’m going to be honest here. I finished this book before the New Year and have been avoiding writing about it because I didn’t like it and frankly couldn’t think of anything to write about. The other night, I was talking to a friend about it and told her how I thought it was boring and totally not engaging, and she explained to me that it’s not about the plot—it’s about the love between the man and his son.

Okay, fine, I get that. Except that’s not why I read books. I read books because I like stories. I don’t want to read an exposé of the love between a father and a son. I’m not really into touchy-feely books like this. It’s just not my thing at all.

I also wasn’t a big fan of the writing style…no quotation marks, run-on sentences, really just not a lot of punctuation in general. I am a big fan of punctuation. As a linguistics major, a grammar nerd, a constant reader, and an amateur writer, punctuation is my friend. I may not always use it correctly (I find I’m particularly fond of dashes where they don’t necessarily belong), but at least when I write, it’s usually decently readable. (Readers, tell me if I’m wrong.) Now, The Road was not nearly as bad as some of Faulkner’s “stream of consciousness” BS, but it was still kind of off-putting to me. Rules exist for a reason. Throwing them out the window doesn’t make you “cool,” at least in my eyes. I suppose that was my frustration with e. e. cummings, thinking he was so awesome and special for not using punctuation. But anyway, I digress.

I didn’t really like this book. Like I said, I guess I just didn’t appreciate it for what it was. I’m more of a plot person, not a “let me read almost 300 pages about how much this guy and his son love each other” kind of person. This book was definitely not for me.


2 stars


This review was originally posted on my personal blog


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March 12, 2012

The Priest and the Peaches, by Larry Peterson

The Priest and the Peaches is the story of the Peach family, immediately following the death of their patriarch. There are five kids, led by Teddy and Joanie, only 18 and 17 respectively. As they bury their father, they contend with what he left behind -- unpaid bills, debt, unsatisfactory living conditions, but also a whole cast of characters ready to pitch in and help.

Plot: I was intrigued by the plot when I picked it up. And I feel like the premise was there. But, in the end, the book was just too simplistic for me. It only spans two weeks, and while a lot happens in that time, you know that there's so much more to the story. These five kids are only at the beginning of an entirely new life and I felt it was a bit of a disservice to only focus on the immediate aftermath.

The book also has a strong Christian message, which I'm not opposed to, but I often find that Christian literature often takes the opportunity to hit you over the head with its intended message. I like a story with a message, but I don't like it when communicating the message means that everything is wrapped up perfectly with a bow on top. Throughout the book, there were "miracles" - the kids magically found money to pay bills when they were down to their last dime and there were people who magically appeared to save the day. Don't get me wrong, I believe miracles happen, but when you added everything up, it felt trite. In the real world, their struggle would have been just that -- a struggle -- even with God and good people on their side. Thus, there had to be a way to get the message across while also communicating the reality of the situation.

Characters: I think the characters were great, but again, I would have liked to see them further developed. Also, the younger Peach had nicknames and that really annoyed me.

Overall, I felt it had potential, but just didn't live up to what I'd hoped. 2 stars.

I received an electronic copy of this book for the purpose of my review. My thoughts are my own, though!

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February 29, 2012

The Social Media Mind by David Amerland

The Social Media Mind dives into the ways that social media has influenced, impacted and changed marketing, businesses and the way we think forever.

Amerland goes into specific detail about how using Google, Twitter and Facebook has made a huge difference in the way businesses are run now.  He talks about how consumers have changed over the years and want to buy from a company that has a face and a story.  Companies that utilize these forms of social media marketing to the highest potential gain the trust and loyalty of their consumers.

He provides interesting tid-bits of the way social media, when used correctly, has helped boost a companies reputation and revenues.  On the same token, when used incorrectly or not at all, how those companies have struggled with image and acceptability.  He uses large companies as examples, such as Gap, Blackberry, Starbucks and Ford.

He includes vital events that have most recently taken place and have changed the way that social media works.  For example, Facebook's last conference, f8, which revealed Facebook's future plans as well as the recent addition of the timeline.  Or Google's effort to match Facebook in the media world with their social networking site, Google+. Or the Occupy Wallstreet movement.  It was interesting to learn the back-story and inside scoop on these events.

However, for all the "interesting tid-bits" that this book contained, the writing was sub-par with lots of rambling.  It was also much too long for this subject and did not really offer any new or "A-Ha" moments that differ from other areas on this subject.  The author also very obviously favors Google over Facebook, and it was annoying to have his biased opinion.  I also fear that this book will no longer be relevant within the next 6 months.  The internet, social media and social networks are changing by the day... in 6 months time, this book will be outdated.

I picked up this book because in the description it boasted on being able to help give practical tools for getting heard.  I have a little personal family blog that I'd like to see grow (shameless plug, I know) and I was looking for more tools on exactly how to do that.  This book did not provide me with anything which would support that.

Who then is this book good for?  People who are interested in learning "tid-bits" behind monster companies such as Google and Facebook.  And small businesses who have not ventured into social media marketing and want to understand why it's so important in today's world.

2 Stars
I received a free copy of this book in return for my honest opinion... this is it. 

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February 5, 2012

The Silver Locket by Margaret James

Rose is the daughter of a rich gentleman. Michael is the son of a rich family. And Alex is the illegitimate son of a harlot. An interesting love triangle to say the least. Now add in World War I, Jane Austen like arranged marriages, and a lot of strange characters and you have The Silver Locket.

Rose's family wants her to marry Michael, a handsome man who is a good match, but Rose wants to do something else with her life. So she runs away, lies to become a military nurse, and meets all sorts of characters while finding her true place in life. Alex joins the army to forget about Rose, the girl he's loved from afar since he was 12. And in forgetting about Rose, he distracts himself with another woman Chloe who he eventually marries out of obligation, not love. And Michael joins the army out of obligation, hates Alex, and continually tries to convince Rose to marry him to gain her father's inheritance.

I'm not going to give away anything else but will say that as much as I wanted to, I didn't really like this book. I finished it because I have a habit of finishing books and I had to for the purpose of this review. But there wasn't a single character that I actually liked other than maybe Maria who was only in about 5% of the book. I felt like they all had major flaws that were infuriating to me, and they all criticized and judged each other when they were doing the same things, just in a different form. One example that killed me was that Rose thought Michael was a terrible person because he abandoned his own child, but Alex abandoned his wife and child but she didn't seem to care. I did however, like the fact that Rose broke from the mold of her society and ran away to do her own thing rather than being forced into a marriage she didn't want.

I also felt like the story just kept dragging on and on without any new developments. The same story that started in England moved to France and then to Russia. Rose worked a nurse, Alex and Michael fought, and they all worried about each other getting hurt. And it just kept going when in reality the same storyline could have been played out in half the pages. This book may be for some people but it wasn't for me. 2 stars.
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January 22, 2012

Dinner With Lisa by R.L. Prendergast

Dinner With Lisa sets place in Canada right after the market crash and great depression that devastated the North American economy in the 1930's.  It follows Joseph, an honest, hardworking and generous widower, who has set off to a new city after the death of his wife with his four small children in tow.  He decided to move to the city of Philibuster, where his half-brother lived, in an effort to raise his children around some family as well as become employed.

Although he had a letter of employment in hand when arriving in Philibuster, his employer, the crooked Mayor, Westmoreland, decided to give his job away to a family member.  Joseph, now desperate for a job, food and a way to support his children continues his daily struggle for survival.  Along the way he makes some friends and many enemies.  He loses a good friend and almost his children.  And he finds love.

It is a story of hope for the hopeless.  And for once, the good guy wins.

Predergast's writing is beautiful.  He carefully lays out each detail vividly.  I know what the city of Philibuster looks like.  I can get to the local shop from Joseph's house.  But, for my own liking, I found this book to be too slow.  With all the description, there was not much room left for dialogue.  Long passages of prose left my eyes heavy.  Also, most of the action takes place in the last quarter of the book... and the journey to get there is long and tiresome... as I'm sure it was for Joseph as well!  Just not my cup of tea.

2 Stars
I received a complementary copy of this book for the purpose of this review.  This is my honest and unbiased opinion.
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January 1, 2012

With Deepest Regrets: A Memoir Alive- by Robin Michael Smith

My husband has been in the military for quite a while, and being a military wife, I approached this book with eagerness and excitement. I love reading military memoirs and I wanted to add this one to the top of my favorites list. This book was advertised as a memoir of a US Army sniper who was sent on a secret mission to assassinate Saddam Hussein. I wanted to love it; I wanted to be enraptured by each and every word and while I fell in love with Robin, both as a man and a soldier, this book just did not measure up.

Before I get to the list of things I did not like about this book, I must say that I was mesmerized by the middle of Smith’s novel. The retelling of his mission was done with eloquence and vivid detail. But this was the only part of the book that kept me reading. Every other page left me with disappointment, and I honestly did not want to finish the book.

I believe that Smith has a great storyline; I just feel the novel needs refinement and editing. The beginning of the book details his childhood and his abusive stepfather. I wanted more detail, more stories that dealt with this part of his life. The few he did tell, completely disturbed me but I enjoyed peering into his soul. I understand that these emotions are still raw, but I believe with some editing and more detail, the beginning of With Deepest Regrets would be transformed into a captivating novel.

The end of the novel also confuses me. I realize that since Smith is still alive and dealing with these emotions that there is no definite end to the story. However, adding in the emails between him and the publisher proved unnecessary. I did not need to know his struggle to get published since every novice author has to face these obstacles. Also, he glazes over the fact that his stepfather died. I want to know more about his emotions, his struggle with this discovery. I wanted to feel closer to Smith and yet I was confused with his journey after he survived his mission in Iraq. I wanted facts, emotions, and plot and instead was served a jumble of words that did not tie the story together.

This story has potential and even with the unfocused plot, grammatical errors, and stagnant ending, With Deepest Regrets was not a complete disaster. I sympathize with Smith’s struggle to come to terms with his mission and the death of his partner. I cannot imagine the obstacles he has faced and has yet to overcome. However, this book needs some desperate help from an editor.

2 stars


*I received a free copy of the book for review. These are my honest and true opinions.
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December 11, 2011

Outlawed Love by J.M. Krumbine

Kate Sharpe, US Marshal, is a woman on a mission with no time for love or romance. Her prisoner, the handcuffed hottie, Kyle Archer, just turned State’s evidence on notorious mobster Jonathon Bragan. Kate’s responsible for getting him from the courthouse to the jailhouse, but can she do it without losing her heart?

I wanted to like this book. I thought the idea behind it was a good one and even the plot was okay, it just fell short for way too many reasons. Maybe it's because I didn't like the main character Kate and her judgmental assuming ways. Or maybe it's because the story was way too predictable. I figured out the main twist in the book within the first couple of chapters and was never surprised again. And my biggest pet peeve was that somehow Kate and Archer think they're in love within the space of what three days where neither of them are truly honest with each other. Lust maybe, but love, I wasn't buying it. And I have to say it, I found the cover of the book to be pretty cheesy.

The book did have one bright spot for me - I really liked Archer. Even though he was a little tough, he still had a tender heart and I liked his muscled vulnerability. If you're looking for a quick read that doesn't keep you guessing, this book might be for you. But unfortunately it wasn't for me. 2 stars.

**I received a free copy of this book in exchange for my honest opinion.
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November 22, 2011

Land of Mountains by Jinx Schwartz

Land of Mountains by Jinx Schwartz is a young adult novel that chronicles the adventures of Texas born ten-year old Lizbuthann (i.e. Elizabeth Anne) after she and her family move to Haiti.  She's a rough and tumble sort of child, always interested in snooping and getting into mischief.  The story follows her as she struggles with disease, political unrest, and the occasional zombie. 

Unfortunately, the first thing that stands out about this book are the formatting mistakes.  Perhaps it is only the Kindle edition but there were copious editing errors--sentences cut off in the middle and starting in the next paragraph, dialogue sometimes having a new paragraph for each speaker and sometimes not, missing quotation marks, and sentences lacking periods.  Every time that I as a reader encountered one of these mistakes it took me out of the magic of the story.

I like the main protaganist.  She's smart, she's sassy and funny, she's a little too curious for her own good, and she loves adventure.  Young adult novels could use more Lizbuthann-style main characters.  While this story is billed as a mystery, I feel that it falls more into the historical adventure genre.

Unfortunately, the episodic nature of Lizbuthann's adventures slows the story down.  Lizbuthann gets polio--and we hear about it for three pages, and it never really comes up again.  There are several interesting elements like that I would have loved to hear more about but are merely mentioned once and dropped.

While I enjoyed the idea of the setting as the lush forests of Haiti, the story was sadly lacking in locale description or setting description in general.  While we are treated to step-by-step descriptions of what the heroine actually does, it lacks any sort grounding in the wider surroundings.  It makes for a much weaker action scene when Lizbuthann is, for example, fording the river in small dam-building machinery, when I can't picture what the dam looks like, what the machinery looks like or even have a clear idea of what the machinery does.

2 stars (3 without the formatting issues)

I received a free copy of this book for the purpose of this review.  These are my honest thoughts and opinions.
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November 13, 2011

The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake and Lemon Cake Pops Giveaway (Closed)

After finishing The Particular Sadness of Lemon Cake by Aimee Bender, only one word comes to mind - strange. The book is centered around Rose, a girl who can taste feelings through her food. It all starts when she's nine and the lemon cake her mother makes her for her birthday takes empty, hollow, and alone. Throughout the next 10-15 years, the book follows Rose as she learns things about people through the food that they make.

Rose's family is a little strange as well. Her grandma sends her packages of things like half-used bars of soap and empty bottles. Her mom starts projects and can't seem to stick to anything. And her brother Joseph is a genius that has an even weirder hobby than her tasting feelings through food.

Honestly, I didn't like this book. I'm not sure what the point of the book was but it felt like that initial lemon cake to me - sad, hollow, and empty. 2 stars.

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September 28, 2011

The Platinum Loop by Austin Williams

Set in 1973, The Platinum Loop by Austin Williams is a new novel scheduled for release in November 2011. Desperate and broke, low-class film producer Gene saves celebrity paraphernalia hustler Floyd in Vegas as he's getting beat up for a deal gone sour. Floyd talks Gene into returning to his Hollywood accommodations to see the best item in his collection - the platinum loop, a raunchy home movie of Marilyn Monroe with some unknown man. Unfortunately the platinum loop isn't all that Floyd made it out to be and Gene and Floyd spend the next few weeks trying to put together something that their rich buyer will purchase. 

And that's your story. Two not so great guys get together to fake a home movie of one of the world's biggest stars doing unspeakable things so that they can sell it to an abusive and perverted man in Tijuana. Not only didn't like the idea behind the plot, I didn't like any of the characters. At no point while I was reading did I think, oh I want these guys to succeed. It was more like, I hate people that lie and scam others. This book may be right for someone, but it wasn't for me. 2 stars.

   

September 15, 2011

All You Can Eat by Richard Harlan Miller


Darius is a distinguished gentleman.  He enjoys the finer things in life, like the opera and a robust glass of wine.  He is a member of the online dating network, He@rt, but not for the purpose of meeting his next love... more like meeting his next lunch.  Darius is a vampire.

Through He@rt, Darius meets Susan and is instantly attracted to her persona.  She is snappy and smart, not like the usual ladies he "dates".  He realizes that there is a true connection made with her.

Luke, an old time vampire friend, comes into town and Darius finds himself babysitting him yet again.  Over the course of their years as friends, Luke has gotten them into plenty of trouble, and Darius sees him more as a nuisance than a true comrade.  Luke hears of an upcoming party and is determined to get Darius to go along.

The party is an ongoing gathering of today's "hippies" or "greenies".  All these modern day flower children getting together, strumming their guitars, tapping bongos, sleeping in tents and smoking a whole lot of pot.  This would be the perfect opportunity to have a little fun and feed freely.  The pair find themselves in a spot of trouble when they find out that old vampire Dimitri is behind the feeding frenzy... creating a sort of harvest.  Now not only are Darius and Luke in trouble, but so is Susan!

In all honesty, I didn't love this book.  I felt it to be confusing at times and didn't begin to move until half way through.  I didn't even realize that Darius and Dimitri were 2 different characters for a while... they sounded similar.  The character voices were not well defined and I had to keep retracing dialogue to figure out who said what.  I though Darius' character had a few personalities... at times he was serious, sometimes annoyed, but then for a while he's really silly and witty.  Although it was funny, it seemed out of character.  However, even with the negative, the prose was beautiful.

2 stars.

I received this e-book free of charge for the purpose of this review.  These are my honest thoughts. 

September 7, 2011

Delivery, by Diana Prusik

In Delivery, Livi Wilson runs her family business, a flower shop, while grappling with grief over the loss of her brother and family friends too soon.

I'll be honest: I wasn't a fan.

Plot: The book starts with the funeral of a local icon, Bink Carter. He's a long-time friend of the Wilson family and Livi is taking it particularly hard. From even the start, the book fell flat because I was constantly hoping/expecting the plot would take a different turn and it didn't. For example, I couldn't figure out why Livi was so heart broken over losing Bink -- even though it was a sudden death and he was a friend. I wasn't invested in the characters enough to really understand the relationship and thus my first instinct was that the author was foreshadowing some more deeper gossip (an affair, a secret past, etc.). But she wasn't, and that just disappointed me. As the plot moves, the reader learns that Livi lost her brother in Vietnam and is still in deep grief over that and Bink's death just brings it to the forefront again. The book takes place in the 1980s, but you'd think she'd lost her brother much more recently.

I liked the flashbacks that related Livi's childhood and told stories about her brother and his death. But I didn't like them enough to make up for the fact that I couldn't understand why this was such a big deal 20 years later.

I realize my above description makes me sound heartless and that I don't understand what grief is. I'd like to think I do and I'd like to think that I could've gotten behind the reasons for Livi's prolonged grief, but the way it was written felt contrived and I just didn't fully see it.

Characters: I liked the characters and the dialogue they shared. It's a very feminine novel and also the story of a small town, and I suppose I enjoyed that aspect of it. I just didn't connect with the characters enough, especially Livi, to understand or relate to her feelings of desperation and sadness.

This book is a Christian novel, so I understand the reasoning for the author's focus on grief and Livi's subsequent descent into alcoholism until she finds God. While I don't typically reach for Christian novels by choice, I've found the occasional novel that I do enjoy because of its sincerity and gentle application of Christian themes.

However, I also find that novels with Christian subject matter tread a fine line between offering a positive message without being "preachy". For me, the sincerity and "real-ness" of Livi's feelings were lost on me and the Christian themes became increasingly preachy, so it made it difficult to dig into the book with the level of interest I'd hoped for. 2 stars.

Disclaimer: I received a free electronic copy of this book, but my opinions are my own.

August 12, 2011

Cash Burn, by Michael Berrier

I’m going to be up front: I did not enjoy this book. In fact, I nearly left it unfinished, but I knew that in order to provide a full review, I needed to finish it. Plus, I have a slight obsession with finishing every book I pick up. So, I muddled through.

Plot: The book is 459 pages long, and it took about 200 pages for the plot to get even remotely interesting. We know the main character, Jason, is struggling with a faltering marriage, but we don’t meet his wife until midway through the book. We know Jason is connected to a man named Flip, but again, it takes the reader a good portion of the novel to figure out how -- and why their current relationship is so frayed. The plot simply moved too slowly to keep me interested and had a lot of tangents that I could have done without.

As a final note, this is a Christian novel, but that doesn’t really come through until midway through and even then it felt like yet another secondary storyline.

Characters: Jason Dunn is a banker with millions of dollars under his control. Flip is a convict out on parole. Diane is Flip’s love interest. Brenda is Jason’s fling as his marriage crumbles. These characters are all intertwined, but because of the slow-moving plot, it took me longer than it should to figure out how and why I should care. There were also a slew of secondary characters, many of whom I felt could be easily cut from the story. For example, I enjoyed Flip’s parole officer, but then the author introduced a second cop and I never connected with him and my enjoyment of the first officer lessened.

Structure: The structure was fine, with chapters of a decent length. My eBook version was poorly formatted for my Nook, leaving some awkward page breaks, and I did notice a few more typos than normal. Though this is more the publisher’s job than the author’s, it does reflect on a reader’s overall impression of the book.

Regarding the writing structure, there were many sections discussing the banking industry. Frankly, most of these left me pretty clueless and just added to my displeasure in reading. I will admit I’m not a math/banking whiz, but there are a lot of things that fall outside my expertise. Yet, I can still read a book about and be both educated and not overwhelmed. In this book, the descriptions of Jason’s work often left me having to re-read sections and eventually give up.

Overall, I felt that the author could have simplified some of the writing and removed some of the extraneous characters and plot lines to make the book a more enjoyable read. I will say that once I got past the first two thirds of the book, the pace picked up. I began to care more about the characters and the plot moved. But it shouldn’t have taken me that long. 2 stars.
While I received a complimentary electronic version of this book, I was not compensated for this review and it is my own thoughts and opinions.


July 14, 2011

Flesh & Bones, by Paul Levine

I was excited to read Flesh and Bones for a couple reasons: I always like starting new books (duh!) and it was the first book I would read on my brand new Nook e-reader.

This new novel is seventh in the Jake Lassiter series, chronicling a former NFL player turned attorney in Miami. I’m always a fan of a good series but I don’t know that I’d put this at the top of my all-time favorites.

Plot:
We meet Jake in a bar catching up with an old friend. A woman walks in and shoots her father before fainting in Jake’s lap. Chrissy becomes Jake’s newest client and the reader follows him as he tries to clear Chrissy of what, on first glance, appears to be a fairly black and white crime.

For me, the plot was a bit predictable and there were points throughout the novel where I questioned actions the characters took, or perhaps didn't take.
However, when Chrissy’s trial came up, I enjoyed the depth of legal knowledge and description that the author brings to his books. As a lawyer, he has an expertise that really comes through and makes the courtroom scenes shine in the novel. I also appreciated the final pages where the truth comes out. It wasn't entirely predictable and helped everything fall into place.

Characters: I think this is where the book fell short for me. I just couldn’t get down with the main characters. There were times when I thought Jake was the noble lawyer and other times when I felt he was lazy and ever so slightly smarmy. I can’t exactly pinpoint what it was about him, but for whatever reason he wasn’t 100% endearing.

I also couldn’t figure out whether I wanted to root for Chrissy or not. Sure she killed her father, but you soon learn there's more to the story. But that "more to the story" didn't become clear until the end, so I spent much of the book being skeptical of her. The author may have intended this because Jake spends most of the novel trying to figure out the same thing as he delves into the private life of his client. Chrissy would seem like the victim one minute and then shady three pages later. It was hard to root for someone who I just couldn't figure out.

Structure:
The book is a breezy read, easy to get into and easy to follow.

Overall a fine read, but not a lot of depth for me aside from the quality courtroom drama. 3 stars.

Disclaimer: I received a free copy for review purposes, but my comments are my own!


July 13, 2011

Larkspur Cove by Lisa Wingate

Larkspur Cove is a story about a woman, Andrea, who moves home to the beautiful town of Moses Lake, Texas with her teenage son after a shocking divorce. Rather than wallow in self-pity, Andrea quickly gets a job as a counselor and moves on with her life as she jumps head first into the lives of those around her including trying to solve the "mystery" surrounding the town recluse being seen with a little girl.

The back of the book sold this to me as a mystery/thriller but other than about ten pages, there wasn't anything mysterious about this book. And to me, there wasn't anything very interesting about this book either. Even with the slight twist in the ending I was bored with how easily it all worked out. I did, however, like the strong-willed characters and feel like I was part of the lake community reading the book, but it just didn't do it for me. So while it's not bad, there is just nothing special about it.

*I received a free copy of this book from Bethany House Publishers for the purpose of this review.


June 24, 2011

This Paper World by Jeff Lane

This Paper World by Jeff Lane tells the story of a typical college guy finding out he's not so typical after all.  Jim Hunt is experiencing life away from home in South Florida, when he begins to have nightmares that will lead him to his true destiny.  While on winter break back home, he meets with his old neighbor who tells him he was made for something more, something greater than this earth has to offer... he's a Champion.  He realizes that what he thought was just fun games of shooting and endurance with his neighbor, Park, was really training for who he would one day become.  Problem is, Jim isn't sure he wants to be a Champion.

The life of a Champion is one of extreme danger and risk.  Jim realizes that there is evil at every turn and must protect the world from the Spoilers' evil doings.  A Champion always fights for what is right and is willing to risk everything to protect it... even his life.

For me, this story was a big miss.  I think there is a pretty decent plot here, but there is a lack of depth which is disappointing.  Champions are good, Spoilers are bad... the end.  But why?  Just because.   There are no twists, turns or surprises... everything pans out the way you expect it to.  There are also many scenes that are inconsequential to the plot... it just seems like filler.  And there are also some loose ends that never get tied back up.

But, that would all be endurable, if not for the horrendous lack of editing... I mean HORRENDOUS!  There were typos and grammatical errors on every.single.page.  About halfway through I wondered if Lane had even re-read his own work?!  How could he possibly miss sooooo many mistakes?  And believe me, I am NO editor... so I'm sure there's even more than what I found.

My recommendation to the author would be to pull this book from Amazon.  It is not fair for your readers to spend any money on this unfinished work... even if it is only $2.99.  You need to hire a GOOD editor and fix a whole lot of mistakes and also beef up the story a bit.  There definitely is something there, but it is FAR from complete.

2 Stars

*This book is currently available only in e-book format*

I received this book free of charge for review purposes and this is my honest opinion. 




May 11, 2011

Shift by Takumi Yamazaki

I'll keep this short and sweet - this book confused me.

The full title of the book is Shift: 13 exercises to make you who you want to be. I was expecting 13 written out, well-defined exercises for me to do to get some motivation and put my life back on track. It started out well; at first I thought the book was going to be about shifting my perspective and teaching me to think about things in a different way, which is where the first half was leading me. But around the middle of the book I got lost and couldn't figure out again what the purpose of the book really was or how I was supposed to use it. The last half of the book is full of what Yamazaki calls techniques (there's 17 of them), and I'm just not sure how those were different than the 13 shifts. Or again how I was supposed to use them.

I think overall there is a lot of good information in this book, but the way it was organized and laid out left me feeling more lost than I was before I started reading it. In short, this book just wasn't for me. It had potential but I need clear, concise instructions and a structure that's easy for me to follow. And I didn't get that in Shift.

I was given a free copy of this book to review. This is my honest and unbiased opinion.



May 5, 2011

Holy Guacamole by Dan and Denise Harmer

What do you get when you cross a washed-up sports writer, the queen of cuisine, and a couple of Mexican thugs? A great read for Cinco De Mayo - Holy Guacamole by Dan and Denise Harmer.

 The story is set in Baja California and stars washed-up sports writer, Trace, as he enters into Bonnie Miller's culinary boot camp. The boot camp days are short-lived as Trace helps Bonnie to clear up something in her past, and they both get caught in a quick and crazy Mexican adventure full of mud, murder, and mischief.

This is a quick read, and a fun one for foodies, who will enjoy all of culinary references. However, that was one of the only bright spots I found in the novel. The plot was low-caliber, the characters weren't particularly exciting to me, and the romance just wasn't believable. The story did move along quickly and kept you guessing for the most part, but I found that even at the end of the novel I really didn't care a ton about what happened to anyone.

The only other bright spot that was kind of haphazardly thrown in at the end of the book was the idea of redemption, forgiveness, and living our lives for other people rather than getting sucked into the vanity of fame and fortune. Always a good theme, even if a little misplaced. An okay debut novel for the authors but if you're looking for a culinary adventure, I would stick to Josi Kilpatrick's Devil's Food Cake and other culinary mysteries.


April 27, 2011

Passage, by Sandy Powers

Passage is the true story of the author's mother, Grace, who was adopted as a baby and lived through war, heartache and abuse before passing away after a battle with cancer.

In order to give a proper review, I feel like I need to turn my usual format on its head.

Structure/Plot: The book is divided into six sections, starting with some introductory content written by Sandy Powers.

We meet Sandy as she's grappling with her mother's death. In sorting her mom's belongings, Sandy uncovers documents and journals that inform her that Grace was adopted. They also detail her mother's life during World War II and the Cold War, where she worked undercover for the FBI. All of this is news to Sandy and is told using what I can only describe as a collection of memorabilia -- news clippings, journal entries, official documents, etc.

At only 128 pages, it was a breeze to read. And with the structure of the book, many pages aren't full, containing only contain a short news clipping or a few journal entries.

Characters: The majority of the book is told from Grace's point of view through her journal entries and other memorabilia she had collected and Sandy is now reading for the first time.

In theory, this is a great backbone for an interesting novel. A daughter uncovering a mother's hidden past. However, Grace's journal entries are short and sporadic. Weeks, months, and even years pass between some entries. This leaves the reader (and Sandy, I'm sure) with a very basic picture of Grace, but never much depth. You're left with more questions than answers. In my opinion, this is where the book falls short.

That being said, the lack of information offered in the book does make me empathize with Sandy, a character in her own right. I can't imagine how she must have felt reading this basic summary of her mother's history without the luxury of being able to ask her mother for the full story.

What could have made the novel richer would have been more of Sandy's feelings and thoughts as she uncovered her mother's secret life. Though she was young, she was alive when her mother was a spy. Does she remember anything about it? What about the feelings and thoughts of her father and siblings?

The last line of the book reads, in part: "My mother. How little I knew her. I buried my face in my hands and cried."

To me, that emotion is where the real story begins. Yet, it's not even explored.

While I felt this was a good skeleton for a great book, the reality left too many gaps to make it compelling. 2 stars.

I received a free copy of this book to review, but my thoughts and my review are my own.


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